The Chosen One Chapter 11 September 8th, 10:00 p.m.The Chosen One Chapter 11 by LuigisLittleAngel
It's been almost 7 hours ever since Peach and I left the Mushroom Kingdom. Peach and I were in Dimble Wood, but we didn't have any luck of finding Luigi. Peach was making a tent to sleep in for the night, but I was staring at the fire while thinking about how Luigi's doing with Ethan. My thoughts were interrupted as soon as Peach touched my shoulder, so I turned around to see that she was looking at me with a worried expression.
"Mario?" Peach asked.
"Yea?" I asked.
"Are you okay?" Peach asked.
It was quiet for a few seconds, until I spoke.
"I don't know," I answered.
I watched Peach while she move right beside me, then sat down. It was then quiet for a few minutes, until Peach spoke.
"Are you worried about Luigi?" Peach asked.
I could only nod in response.
"It'll be okay Mario," Peach said. "We'll find Luigi."
"I'm not so sure about tha
Mario's Weakness Chapter 1 -Gift- Mario's POVMario's Weakness Chapter 1 -Gift- by LuigisLittleAngel
It was a peaceful Friday evening in the Mushroom Kingdom. I was watching the sunset with Peach, while Luigi was doing some of the chores at home. Peach and I were sitting underneath a tree at the park, but Peach's head was laying on my shoulder, while I had my arm around her body. We continued to watch the sunset, until Peach spoke.
"The sunset is really beautiful Mario," Peach said.
"Yea it is," I replied. "But, it's not as beautiful as you."
"Oh stop," Peach said while blushing. "You're just saying that."
"No, I'm serious," I explained while smiling. "Nothing in this world is more beautiful than you."
"Aww," Peach said. "Thanks sweetie. That means a lot to me."
"No problem Peach," I replied. "You mean everything to me and I want you to be happy."
Peach giggled for a few seconds, then kissed me on the nose. I started to blush, but I continued to looked at the sunset while still wrappi
The Chosen One Chapter 10 2 hours later.The Chosen One Chapter 10 by LuigisLittleAngel
It's been about 2 hours ever since Ethan and his minions left the throne room. I was still in the cage, but I was completely bored out of my mind. I was playing with my shoelaces until I heard some footsteps. I looked ahead of me to see Max walking towards me with a bowl of food.
"What are you doing?" I asked.
"I'm giving you some food," Max answered.
"Why?" I asked.
"Because Ethan doesn't want you to die by starvation," Max answered.
I watched Max while he was slowly putting the food through the bars and putting it right in front of me.
"Don't get use to eating a lot in this castle," Max said. "Because in here, you're not gonna eat a lot, but we'll still feed you."
I slowly started to eat some of the food until I heard some footsteps i
The Chosen One Chapter 9 Luigi's POVThe Chosen One Chapter 9 by LuigisLittleAngel
There was an awkward silence after Ethan removed the drape. All of the minions in the room looked really surprised that I would be the chosen one, and yet, they kept staring at me, which made me feel really uncomfortable. It was like that for about 2 minutes, until one of the minions broke the silence.
"Hey!" one of the minions screamed. "It's Mario's younger brother! The cowardly sidekick!"
Pretty soon, every minion in the room started to laugh. I felt really embarrassed, so I pulled my legs close to my chest, put my arms around my legs, and buried my head into my knees. The minions kept laughing their butts off, until it got to the point where Ethan was getting annoyed.
"Enough!" Ethan yelled.
The minions immediately stopped laughing, so I slowly stopped burring my
Stuff I'm working on. (I'll try to update this as often as I can.)
The Chosen One Chapter 12
Mario's Weakness Chapter 2
The Maria Sisters Chapter 1
I don't know if I'll ever open them again.
I'm not gonna have a lot of time doing point commissions because of school and some stories I'm working on.
I'm gonna work on some gifts while I'm working on The Chosen One, but I'm not gonna abandon The Chosen One anytime soon.
If you want to do a trade with me, feel free to ask me, but if a lot of people ask me at the same time, I'll just do an art trade with friends.
I will only do a collaboration if I write the story and the other person illustrates the story. (Pretty much what RobinLee and saiiko did with the Brotherly Love series.)
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I'm not gonna have a lot of time to do kiribans, so I'm not gonna do them.
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