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PLEASE READ THE DESCRIPTION BEFORE YOU COMMENT! I HAVE A FEELING THAT YOU GUYS ARE NOT GONNA READ THIS, BUT FOR THIS CHAPTER, PLEASE READ THIS!  (Normally, I don't really care that much if you read the description, but in this case, PLEASE read the description before you comment or ask a question (or at least be mature).  If you guys aren't gonna be mature enough for this chapter, then I'll disable comments.)

LUIGI AND MAX ARE NOT GAY IN THIS STORY!  JUST BECAUSE MAX IS COMFORTING LUIGI, IT DOES NOT AUTOMATICALLY MEAN THAT THEY LOVE EACH OTHER!  (This is more like a brotherly love scene I do all the time in my other stories.)


Now, that everything I wanna get out is said, let's actually get to what I wanted to say (which is kind of long). :faint:

 First off, this is actually the first time I matured a chapter in The Chosen One, but I promised you that it's not as bad as you think it is.  The reason I matured it is because of what happened near the end of this chapter (but, it's nothing serious).

 Second, this chapter turned out WAY different than what I originally thought of. (As much as I would love to list all of the original ideas I had for this chapter, I am kind of lazy right now.) ^^;

 Third, this chapter is probably one of the longest chapters in the entire series. (Not only that, this chapter took me 2 months to finish.) :faint:

Fourth, I realized that this is the second time, in a row, that a chapter of The Chosen One didn't have Mario's POV, and I promised you guys that I'll have Mario's POV in the next chapter.  (I was actually gonna put Mario's POV in this chapter, but this chapter was already long, and I really didn't feel like adding it in this chapter.) ^^;

Fifth, and lastly, for some reason, I feel a little embarrassed to post this.  This is most likely because I had to mature it (but, once again, it's not as bad as you think).  I promised that this will most likely be the only time I put a mature tag on a chapter in The Chosen One, so please don't be mad that this has a mature tag on it. :please: (To be honest, the reason I did this idea for this chapter was honestly because this was the only idea I had to continue on with the story, so yea.) ^^;

 Anyway, I'm sorry for any mistakes, and I hope you guys like this chapter. (And please try to be mature if you're gonna leave a comment.)

 Luigi belongs to Nintendo.
 Max, Alex, and Ethan belongs to me.
 The story belongs to me.
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© 2014 - 2024 LuigisLittleAngel
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May I aak why you did not finish this story? Because I love how you progressed the story and how you made me like new characters in the story. So please make more, because of story's on devenart I love reading now and my spelling has improved drastically. So please dont stop making story's or art because I love your work and others do as well because you have a talent most people dont have so show your talent to the world and never give up.